Shannaro!!! Manga chapter XXXIV: J-sama’s decision

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Previously: The number 8 ninja from the moon country has attacked the shadow country and took 3 gennins wih him and is now fighting J-sama Ws Sothe Chaos Shika Sokka and 3 KAEB’s.

The ninja smiles as J-sama stands in front of him and charges at him but he doesn’t come close to him since one of the KAEB’s has stabbed him in the chest but suddenly he explodes in a suicide jutsu that hits the KAEB who gets blasted back and falls down the roof they were standing on but as he almost hit the ground he got caught by one of the other KAEB’s

ANBU.jpg ANBU image by HearThemScream

KAEB2: What have i told you about reckless assasinations against clone users?

KAEB1: The one that looks to be real might be a clone and uses a suicide exploding jutsu when you hit a vital spot.

Back on the roof the other KAEB has captured the 3 gennins in a earth jutsu but they suddenly explode also.

 

J-sama: Dammit just like i thaught we played right into his trap! men don’t attack them in close range since they might explode when they get hit! the real one is probbaly long gone already.

Chaos: So we are just wasting time here?

Sothe: WS Chaos let’s end this

White Shinobi & Chaos: OK!

Chaos: Swords Dance!

Chaos summons 20 sword and puts chakra threads on them to conroll all of them all at the same time and cuts the enemies outside their explosion range.

White Shinobi: Ice Lance

White Shinobi makes a ice lance and hits the enemies before he comes in their range and when the lance get’s damaged he just fixes it.

Sothe: Illusion Demon Circkle

The illusions surround sothe and attack the clones.

Shika: These powers of them are not half bad.

Sokka: *deactivates gofuuungan* yea but they are not used to them yet so it costs a lot of chakra i won’t be suprised if they collapse.

Just as Sokka said that Chaos begins to get more tired and his accuracy drops letting one clone get inside his guard but because of quick handeling from one of the KAEB members the clone explodes far away from chaos.

Chaos: So it’s you huh? “Gravitron” (This is a nickname for the guy not his real name)

KAEB: You should get used to that power before you’re gonna use it.

All the clones seem to have exploded.

Sothe: I know i should get used to it first but the best way to get used to it is to fight with it right?

KAEB: True but what should we do now? they have escaped.

J-sama: We should recover our strength and tomorrow let’s meet at noon in my office.

All: Ok!

*The nexy day at noon in the genkage office*

J-sama: So are all of us here?

White Shinobi: Yes.

Grand Hokage: Wait iruka isn’t here!

ZepWolfX: Mart isn’t here either

Anbu Quazzie: Same with IO

J-sama: THat’s the reason i called all of you here, they have joined the moon country .

Silver Uchiha: Then we should attack the moon country to get them back.

Darklurker: Yea i’m shure they didn’t join in their own free will.

E.R.nefarious: Shut up you brats! We are not going to attack the moon country at least not now, we need to get more info on them before we go there.

Tailedfox: Well if that’s all we should go back to training.

*all the gennins leave the room together with the chuunin and most jounin*

Whitefangofkonaha: So we really won’t go and fetch them back?

J-sama: No i wish we could but we can’t afford to walk in another one of their traps.

The KAEB members from last night come in too.

Laydee Kay: You guys are late!

KAEB: Sorry.

J-sama: It doesn’t matter much, now take your masks off.

SexyGaara.jpg Anbu Garra picture by Doomsdaycomes

*they all take their masks off*

Chaos: So i was right Gravitron-san

Pain0Avenue: I prefer it if you call me on my normal name.

Chaos: Oh i’m sorry p0a

Sothe: So how’s life in the KAEB guys?

Yellow Uchiha: Well it’s alright, at least we got no annoying gennins around us like you guys have.

Whitefangofkonaha: Yea you’re right but it’s never boring with those guys around.

Paintheclown: Well we shouldn’t forget our own time as a gennin.

White Shinobi: He’s right we were some troublesome guys too.

J-sama: I’d hate to interrupt your conversation but i got a mission for all of you.

Chaos: This should be a super S rank mission if we’re all included.

J-sama: That’s right it’s a super S-rank one, i want you guys to go somewhere *tells the details*

*let’s look at what the gennins are doing*

Grand Hokage: Ok if those old geezers won’t help us we will go on our own!

Kisuzachi: Yea Let’s go we can’t let a commerade go to the enemy’s side.

Darklurker: Wait we will need to leave a clone here to fool the others.

Sephiroth: just who are you guys trying to fool?

All: Sephiroth Senpai!

Sephiroth: That’s my name yes.

Suna no ken: Sensei will you try to stop us if we go?

Sephiroth: If i would try to stop you would you give up on getting them back?

Suna no ken: Ofcorse not!

Sephiroth: Ok then go i saw nothing.

???: I’m sorry but i can’t allow you guys to go out here, you know Enju-san wants to be in peace for now.

Sephiroth: Kids go! i will handle this guy.

???: So you’re Sephiroth the starter of this whole war i’m number 51 Kashi nice to meet you

Kashi uses a earth technique and tries to hit the gennins with it but Sephiroth makes a cut on Kashi’s cheek while he was casting it.

ff7greatsephiroth.jpg Sephiroth image by YamiChevonne

Sephiroth: You will die if you don’t fight me seriously.

kashi: I see you really are strong.

Sephiroth: *smiles* That was nothing

 Kashi tries to hit Sephiroth but Sephiroth dodges him and now jumps at Kashi, kashi get’s into a defencive stance but as soon as Sephiroth comes close he dissapears and kicks Kashi in his back.

Kashi: *coughs up blood* it seems i underestimated you.

Sephiroth: you shure did.

Kashi jumps at Sephiroth but now at far greater speed and both of them fight egually for a while until Sephiroth uses a combination of a fire thunder and wind jutsu. (he first shoots a fireball that get’s dodged by Kashi but it was only ment to block his vision since a lightning spike impales his left arm folowed by a wind blade that makes a big cut on his right arm)

Kashi: Dammit you really are a genious ninja, i can’t win after all.

Sephiroth: Do you have a last wish?

Kashi: Yes.. kill that bitch that has a number 4 on his wrist.

Sephiroth: I will respect your wish i might not be the one that kills him but he will die for shure.

Kashi: Thank you. *Gets decapitated*

*Back to the genkage room*

J-sama: WS where have you sealed “that” scroll?

White Shinobi: It’s right here *Cuts hand open and gets out a small tag*

YellowUchiha: It’s that small?

White Shinobi: Ofcorse not *half ram seal realease*

The tag becomes larger and it seems to be summoning tag where a scroll get’s summoned out.

J-sama: Ok one of you will need to make a contract to the scroll.

White Shinobi: WFK do it.

Whitefangofkonaha: Why me?

White Shinobi: You’re the only one whitout a scroll here so you’re the only one able to do it.

J-sama: Oh and i’ll like to add that Sothe and Choas won’t participate in the first part of the mission.

Sothe: Why not?

Chaos: To give us time to master our scroll?

J-sama: Indeed so for the first part we have 2 others who are late.

Familiar voice: What do you mean late? We were here all the time we just wanted some fresh air.

PainTheClown: That voice… Sokka?

*door opens*

Sokka: Damn right it’s me

Shika: Sokka you’re annoying.

Sokka: Shut up why did you have to come here anyway?

Shika: Because master told us we are the best suited to go to “that” land.

Pain0avenue: Where are we going anyway?

White Shinobi: To a country where only a few humans have lived to tell the tale i’ve been there once but i was not strong enough to stay there for longer then 10 minutes at that time.

Sokka: tell us more we’ll need more details if we’re going there.

White Shinobi: Ok it consists of 2 islands and the one we are getting send is divided in 8 parts.

FileIsland.jpg File Island image by irekinomoto

A huge mountain that is said to reach into the heavens it’s located in the middle of the island

A volcano that is said to be strong enough to destroy a whole country

A icy forest that is said to be the coldest place on earth and it’s locted next to the volcano

Then next to the ice forest there’s a wasteland with no shelter to predetors.

Next to the wasteland there’s a forest with trees as huge as a skyscraper.

Next is the underground cave it’s a dark place and it’s a labirint in there.

Then next are the thunder plains the air is heavy and it’s said lightning will strike there each 10 minutes.

Lastly there’s a lake located between the thunder plains and the volcano even i don’t know much about it.

Shika: This is intresting i would like to see it.

White Shinobi: There’s more, You can only enter the mountain if you collect 7 orbs from the guardians who are hidden in each part.

Sokka: And lemme guess we’ll have to get on the mountain?

J-sama: That’s right on the top of the mountain there live the masters of the island you will need to ask them for an allience.

Yellowuchiha: How strong are those monsters on the island?

White Shinobi: When i was still chuunin i was able to stay there 10 minutes but it almost got me killed so it should be safe to say they are between chuunin and joinin level.

PainTheClown: And about how many are there?

White Shinobi: Too much to count i think about 500 each part.

Pain0avenue: Let’s go then.

*WFK opens the scroll and everyone who toutched it get’s sucked in*

*the gennins have reached the location where Iruka, IO and Mart are*

A moon ninja runs into the room where the 3 are hold.

Ninja: Enju-sama we got visitors.

Enju: So they have come to get you guys back let’s welcome them.

Enju walks outside.

Enju: I know you guys are out here show yourselves this is a clone so it wont help you to kill me.

A sword cuts the clone down and they all rush inside

Enju: They killed it even though i told them not to, well this might get fun i was bored anyway.

2 ninja’s block the way but Grand Hokage grabs his bow and shoots 2 arrows and kills both ninja’s with 2 perfectly aimed shots. when they jumps over the 2 dead ninja’s another ninja attacks them but zep kills him with his gentle fist. but as soon as the ninja is dead 2 other jump at them but get quickly beaten by Kisuzachi and Silver Uchiha. When they turn around the corner they see 3 ninja’s preforming a wind jutsu but Naruto Uzumaki shoots a fireball at them, the fireball becomes bigger because of the wind and the 3 ninja’s get heavy burns then Anbu Quazzie and tailedfox finish the job: Anbu Quazzie uses a doton to prevent 2 of them from moving and hit’s the 3rd one with a nekode while Tailedfox plants kunai in the other 2.

Darklurker: Zep Have you found them yet?

Zep: No but i found sometihng strange..

Darklurker: What do you mean?

Zep: All of the guys we have killed so far had the same chakra it’s almost as if they were all clones.

Darklurker; Maybe it were clones

Zep: But clones dissapear after they get hit

Darklurker: Probally not all clones this guy is a clone specialist remember?

As soon as Darklurker said that they come in a hall with verry much doors

Grand Hokage: Let’s split up so we can search faster.

They all go in a different room but all of them are empty only the door Anbu Quazzie opened led to antoher hallway and he called the others and at the end of the halway there is a door.

The door get’s opened from the inside by Enju.

Suna no ken reacts fast and swings his sword at him but enju just blocks it with his moon tonfa and smashes it in Suna’s belly followd by a kick to his head that sends him flying against the wall.

Zep: You bastard! Shugo Hakke Rokujuyon Sho

Zep tries to hit his chakra points but Enju seems unafected.

Zep: What the?

Enju: So you don’t even know about the moon armor? It can block all chakra attacks as long as i put chakra in it including your gentle fist style.

Just as he had said that a huge wind powered fireball from NU flies at him but it get’s neutralized also.

Enju jumps at Naruto Uzumaki and Silver Uchiha who are combining their powers for another wind-fire combination and knocks both against the wall. Then he blocks a incoming attack from Anbu Quazzie and Tailedfox, but he can’t block the arrows Grand Hokage has shot at him and manages to avoid them by summoning a clone that takes the blow, the clone dies and Enju pushes Anbu Quazzie and Tailedfox back and jumps then he uses Zep as a stepping stone and smashes his tonfa’s into darklurker, but before he can reach him Kisuzachi Kicks him away and Suna quickly uses a shadowstep to cut him.

NU, SU, IO & AQ: Quadrouple Dragon! 

They use a Karyuudan, Doryuudan, Rairyuudan and Fuuryuudan at the same time and the jutsu’s merge together into a 4 element dragon that crashes into Enju who is unable to neutralize it and get’s slammed into the celing and makes a hole in it.

Darklurker: It seems my theory was right you can only neutralize 3 different chakra’s at a time.

Mart: How do you know that? we haven’t used a 3 element technique yet, he might not be able to block that one.

Darklurker: After the attack only 1 dragon survived if he is able to neutralize 3 of them but not the 4th So i think he can only disable 3.

Enju: Ok i underestimated you guys but you won’t be able to keep up with me anymore (looks at the hole in the celing and sees a full moon) Tsuki (moon) *his moon equipment begins to glow* Senkou (flash)

A blinding flash fills the room and when the flash is gone all the gennins are unconsious on the floor.

Enju: I’m sorry it was this shorth but i have to go now or tsukikage-sama will kill me for being late again.

*Some time later SSj Sasuke and Sharingan Leader come to the hideout and see the genins collapsed on the floor*

SSj Sasuke: It seems we’re too late.

Sharingan Leader: Yea let’s just bring them back to the village.

*SSj and SL are back in the village*

SSj Sasuke: Let’s go to the hospital.

Sharingan Leader: Yea.

When they arrive at the hospital they see Guruku Laydee Kay and J-sama waiting for them.

J-sama and Laydee Kay take the gennins to the top floor where a team of medics is waiting already.

Guruku: We will be going to the crimson valley tomorrow at noon if we are fast we might make it before the night.

SSj & SL: Ok!

*Sothe and Chaos are at a special training zone far away from the village where they are sparring to master their new techniques*

Chaos summons 8 swords and he controls them with chakra strings and Sothe get’s into defencive stance.

Chaos: Iron coffin!

The swords get into a position where they surround Sothe.

Sothe: Demonic Circle!

8 Illusion clones appear all around Sothe as soon as the swords are in his range and then 8 more appear and push the swords into the ground. (the clones dissapeard after 1 second)

Chaos: Why don’t you us your clones longer then that? it would give a huge adventage.

Sothe: When i use 10 and keep them all 1 second it costs less chakra then when i keep 1 for 3 seconds so to fight more effective i use it this way.
Now sothe get’s offencive and jumps at Chaos who summons a shield to block Sothe but since he’s in his clone range now he get’s kicked into the air from 3 dirctions and then Sothe has gathered chakra for a huge lightning jutsu that falls on Chaos who manages to block it by summoning a huge sword that he uses as a lightning director and shoots it at Sothe who uses a barrier to block it.

*Nef comes running in the hospital with a letter*

Nef: J-chan! there’s a kage meeting comming!

J: So they took action i was wondering if they would ignore it or not.

Nef: There’s only 1 problem we will need to leave soon we will be too late if we don’t.

J: Ok are there any special things?

Nef: The 2 strongest ninja’s must join the kage so that means me and LK will have to come too.

Laydee Kay: Ok let’s go then we might anger them if we are too late.

The kages are holding a meeting how will it turn out? a big brawl? assasination attempts? at least let’s hope it won’t be a boring everyday meting you have in your office. Next time on the Shannaro Manga: 5 Kages Unite: Tsukikage, Genkage, Musikage, Seikage, and Edakage.

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10 Responses

  1. Ws you know I have always loved reading your fan fic chapters right? Well I just gotta say that this is one of the funnest chapters to follow. The way the story progressed and the action scenes we’re easy to follow. You are not only getting better at making a story plot, but aklso how you write it down, and that takes talent. Good Job!
    Suna OUT!

  2. Great Chapter Whitey!

    Thanks for putting me in it!

  3. I want More pictures! It was pretty good

  4. mart stfu about pictures you’re the one who said 1 picture on each 1000 words was ok and i got 6 in less then 3000 words

  5. im happy im in the story!!! great job

  6. no I said you tried to compensate for a lack of pictures WITH a 1000 words, and that that was bad. You should do a picture every six words, and then change the name to “Bleach” and just make it a manga.

  7. Oh, Mart, that was rich, lmfao

  8. I wish I was in it…

  9. “Mart, that was rich”-It’s just a universal truth, we who read manga, like pretty pictures, that’s why we join shannaro instead of a book club (mostly no pretty pictures, just cugars drinking wine) if this is a manga about shannaro, I wonder why there are references to people’s names, but not their habits, interests, or personalities for the most part.

  10. Forbidden Island : World 1-1

    This is still my favorite on-going series here at Shannaro! WS, great job as always.

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